He chuckled at that, mostly because the pre-Deeks version of Kensi would never have thought about alliteration. Change), You are commenting using your Facebook account. But. But if something happens on the show, if you have decent continuity, it does get carried forward and in my opinion, it tends to color everything that happens from that point forward To me, the fun part is writing what hasnt happened and what probably wont happen., He takes the bag and looks inside. While we've done our best to make the core functionality of this site accessible without javascript, it will work better with it enabled. Diane | Founder, Writer, & Contributing Editor, Follow wikiDeeks | Marty Deeks | NCISLA on WordPress.com. And both of those things make you different from him. "Not my own accomplishments." Kensi spent a moment considering where that left them. Website Powered by WordPress.com. I thought about all the things most people give to the women they love on Valentines Day. Their pasts are part of who they are but shouldnt define their futures. He shrugged his indecision, prompting her to continue. Too big is his anxiety that his love will be ripped away from him. She loves Deeks more than anything, but at the same time, she has no patience for his shenanigans. But he was wrong. This conversation was your idea., I know. And so, they had, later that night, over a bottle of wine. We dont have to talk about it. But is that what happened?. Copyright 2023 That has to give us an advantage, doesnt it? Smiling once again. I felt responsible. Looking forward to season 13 beginning next week! He's overcome adversity and frequently proven that he'll do the right thing, so it raised a few eyebrows when Internal Affairs began to investigate him. So the file could have been changed once she handed it over to Hetty. Not at Henrietta Lange. Deeks has a teenage daughter, Dani who always has a knack for getting into trouble and she wants to be just like her father so when the team gets a case about a bombing she wants to help, so when she sneaks off to help she ends up getting kidnapped. (LogOut/ If hes submitted his information., Deeks shrugged again. Its been a long time since Ive had someone who has as much faith in me as I have in them., It seems that, like us, our writers just want Deeks (and Kensi) to be happy. It was how hed reacted, after their first night together, when he hadnt taken a shot, fearful that it could have put her in danger. He knew exactly what she meant. I also liked your twist on why his last name is Deeks. I dont know. Glad it didnt go too far afield! If its satisfying for fan fiction writers to let Densi express their feelings verbally, its even more so to be able to bring these two characters together as a committed couple. Whats your favorite NCISLA Christmasepisode? But the state of their family had been paramount in each of their minds. Im just going to appreciate her, for being who she is. (TV 2017), NCIS: Los Angeles, , Bones (TV) Not Rated. The Empty glass of truth. Does maybe mean you havent looked into it?. And they both knew the answer. We can only hope and keep writing. Not happening., Probably shouldnt considering we havent hazed him yet for passing muster and actually becoming an NCIS Investigator., Hazing? Deeks made it to the beach in five minutes. Required fields are marked *. Youre fireworksyoureyoure a rock and roll band, baby, the dragon at Chinese New Years, the Aurora Borealis, youre all the stars in the skyyoure sunshine and gunpowder, Kens. Now I love to analyze any and all aspects of the best character on television. I loved this fanfiction, thanks for writing it. Change). She lost him too. She immediately knew his thoughts were turning back to that of his father. Ive looked. But, for the record, I do like our friends, and Im happy to spend time with them., And I love you for saying that and for a million other reasons.. The explosion knocked him off his feetandthe old wooden building burst into flames. Besides, Im an NCIS Investigatoragent person now.. Contact us if you are the owner of something and you would like it removed. I I I dont She shook her head, unable to find the right words, and Deeks reached out in sympathy, pulling her back against him, wrapping his arms across her chest. But he guessed it made sense. Just for being. . He interrupted her. She rode alongside him for a while, then headed back to the sand, and simply watched her husband work out his tension in the surf. So, if your dad had been looking for you, he would have run into a wall.. "From my shower," Deeks answered, focusing on his computer booting up instead of letting the team see . Even if they dont want to admit even to themselves. And me, too. You two just back off for one damn minute, Kensi demanded. What if he had a boyfriend? They both fell almost instantly in love. document.getElementById( "ak_js_1" ).setAttribute( "value", ( new Date() ).getTime() ); This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Id like to see her stand up to a Gordon Brandel who shows up on their doorstep one night, and to see them both let Hetty have it for lying to them (again). The events of this case had been revealing, and not just about Hetty. I lost my dad when I was young, and you might as well have. She laughed as the boat pulled away and he drew her to the railing where they enjoyed their champagne. What kind of journey can we expect for Deeks in Season10? Romance at your Service: Deeks Surf Log 4/23/23. Just for being who she was to him. by just_me_4321. You can debrief him after he sees a paramedic.. I think it would be natural for Deeks to wonder about the validity of his fathers death. They needed a next of kin, so Hetty looked into it, and, And Hetty told me he was dead. She is first-date-only girl. Its going to be interesting to see how everyone incorporates canon now into their ideas of how their relationship will work at and away from work. But how can I not?. Still, theyd found a way to move on together, even if it had required the interventions of social workers and the juvenile justice system. You explored the question in the best way. All images copyright their respective owners, no infringement intended. When you put it like that, she wasnt wrong., He brushed the sand from his fingers. Her Kensi is the hesitant one. What? Stopping abruptly as he tried to read Callen. A lots happened between then and now. Which thought brought him back to a conversation hed had just a few weeks ago, with the other woman he loved. I mean, he had to have had some redeeming qualities for your mom to have been with him in the first place, right? Surrounded by fire and falling debris, he ran toward the exit, finding it blocked by a collapsed beam. Two men suddenly stumbled out the door of the small office, arguing loudly and shoving one another. He blamed Callen for this, and if he survived he intended to kick his butt for ruining what was supposed to be a perfectly lovely evening. Im a glass half full kind of person and depressing stories depress me so I dont like to read them very often. 322 Stories. Deeks studied the features of the woman he loved so very deeply, trying to read her, not quite certain she was ready for this particular conversation. When he finally joined her on the shore, Kensi was relieved to see that much of the tightness was gone from his shoulders, but keen enough to notice what remained. This is not what I wanted for Valentines Day., Me either, he replied as shepushedhim toward the ambulance. Wr. Well move away from Densi (for now) and take a look at a few special versions of Deeks. I am a former graphic designer and live in Northern California with my husband and a Cocker Spaniel named Gracie. She got a small one. Somebody she could save by bringing you into her fold., He gave her a lopsided smile. Deeks expects to be left alone, to never see the NCIS agents again. And so, theyd each had a singular experience of wishing, and hoping, and fearing. Website Powered by WordPress.com. Putting our souls at risk?, Weve killed people, Kens. Her husband, and the man who would one day be the father of her child. You got used to me., She flashed a smile at him. It was the only picture he had of his mom, the one he thought he had lost. Back at the beginning, and, and even to this day, if he was honest with himself, Henrietta Lange had seemed a little otherworldly to him, a little magical, and a lot mysterious. Or maybe not. Great write-up again. Deeks stretched himself out sideways on the blanket, propping his head on his hand, and Kensi mirrored him. Contact us if you are the owner of something and you would like it removed. What was your craziest day of filming NCISLA? Not after what theyd all just been through. Arties services are required on this one. Because I know Cat can get carried away when shes talking about it. Kensi Marie Blye is a normal 32 year old woman. There was an interior wall with an open sliding door painted an unfortunate green. It didnt happen, Kens. Thats just the thing! but I have read some great ones on the FanFic sight and am amazed at how wonderful they do seem to work out together, Jericho Steele says. He jumped right infront of the bullet to safe his partner and best friend Sam from being shot in the back. A Love Story (NCIS LA DENSI) by Musicarter00 36.5K 675 17 After brushing up on their communication skills, and saying what they mean, Kensi and Deeks began building their life together. Being able to direct her gaze toward the fire burning in the hearth, and not into the unmasked hope in her husbands eyes, seemed to loosen something within Kensi, and the words came. Again.The universe will never be on his side! I absolutely love your take on whether Deeks father could still be alive. Would he want me to forgive him? Until onscreen Densi went all-in, I enjoyed these domestic stories but always there was that niggling thoughttheyre not there yet..not thereI was not keen on domestic Densi but now I am looking forward to re-reading this genre. Are you saying you feel differently now?. I try to stay as close to the character as I can and lately they want to be together and are trying to figure it out whereas before, they might have wanted to be together but thought that it was impossible and didnt really try very hard., Some writers write Densi together without letting the rest of the team in on their relationship. And maybe a long shower. What does that mean?. I mean, we both know someone who kind of does seem to feel that way, and look what its done to her., But she also took care of all those children, Yeah, and look what happened with that. Review: NCISLA A Tale of Two Igors(S12E18), Review: NCISLA A Line in the Sand (S9E23) and Ninguna Salida(S9E24), Writing Deeks: The Voices of NCISLA Fan Fiction: A Decade of DeeksRe-Post, I Fell a Little More in Love Today: Kensis Journal4/23/23, Mr. Maybe.. You okay? Im done not talking about it., His gaze remained steady on her face. Which was the crux of the matter, after all. For a few hours a few, blissful, frightening, amazing, intimidating hours theyd thought Kensi might be pregnant. I read practically any and everything Deeks/Densi related that I could find in the four months I was home with the baby. So what, then? Not even a mention of a car accident that might have taken his life, not an obituary, not a police record beyond what he already had., But I thought Nell researched him for Hetty?, She did. Just love that we have this moment together.. The domestic Densi have been one of my favourite types of stories especially since December, when they went All in. I love you., I love you too, baby, she said and kissed him back. When Deeks saw the injury the boy sustained, his eyes turned deep blue. Im not going to subject them to what I went through.. No two people, either. I dont have idea how I havent noticed this story. To both of us. Kensi glanced up at Deeks, he had placed his bag down at . Both of them were silent for a long time, contemplating. (And nice job with the no-spoiler description.). Not so with Hunter. Correction. I love you even when you stink. But you wont be. It was Hetty who brought me on, and I think we all know it wasnt by chance. Where is she, by the way? Callen asked. I had no idea that fanfic existedthe whole conceptit was mind boggling. Now, it seemed, he did. How long have you been thinking about this?. Thanks for writing. (LogOut/ But dont worry. What are the odds Im going to find something good in his family history? Hell, hed let her stand in as his own family when hed been shot. Okay. I dont need anything, Deeks. But, I wanted it to be more special than candy and flowers.. So beautiful. You always make me feel such strong emotions and this story was no exception. A gray van was parked at an angle in the middle of the space, but he saw no one and heard no voices. Learn how your comment data is processed. And, ironically, each time it had been for her. Callen asked. How can we help fire victims? document.getElementById( "ak_js_1" ).setAttribute( "value", ( new Date() ).getTime() ); This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. I love all the thoughts and insights. God she looked so much like her mother. It was it was that time you were shot. Bingo, he whispered, grinning until he saw one of the bad guys grab a weapon from one of the cases. Maybe theyd feared it was true, or feared it was not. Quit stalling, Callen said. A small office jutted out from the back wall, but he couldnt see inside. Once Densi is together as a couple, it's a natural next step to consider writing them as pregnant, or as husband and wife. I wanted to write them navigating a partnership, then a romantic relationship, then balancing family issues, having to make decisions and sacrifices that made sense for them as a married couple and a family, and then ultimately having to examine their professional desires with their love for each other and their family. All images copyright their respective owners, no infringement intended. But there will always be that chance, she said. Not without a reason, I agree with that. She was glad to see that shed alleviated some of his tension. wikiDeeks is a non-profit fan site devoted to the character Marty Deeks of the hit CBS television show, NCIS: Los Angeles. wikiDeeks is a non-profit fan site devoted to the character Marty Deeks of the hit CBS television show, NCIS: Los Angeles. Awesome as per usual. Tears gathered in his eyes as he looked at this amazing woman who, for the second time, had agreed to marry him. He sat up and took a long look at the sea before responding to her. And thats how you rocked my world., Deeks looked around the room, finally lifting the covers, Who are you and what have you done with my wife?, You know why I said yes this time last year when you proposed?, My devastating good looks, wit, charm, sexual prowess, I said yes because after all that went on with the investigation into my fathers death, there you were. Youre still a Blye. Not so with Akhos Laos. Instinctively, hed always seen Bertie as a protective presence, even when shed been so woefully unable to protect him. I already wrote here on this site that I am immensely happy that we met Roberta and learned how much she loves and is proud of her son. Hed been out of control any number of times, angry enough to kill, and maybe he would have, if there hadnt been others there to stop him. Did you ever think of that? His hair still damp, though this time from the shower, he stopped directly behind her as she poured out two mugs of freshly brewed coffee. She is u. Their particular mother-son bond may not have been a traditional one, and maybe it hadnt even been all that healthy. She was not a fan of Artie, which hurt his feelings a little, but it was fun listening to her rant. Chapter one: Precursor to an idea I had when re-watching Casino Royale and Skyfall. But that doesnt mean she wasnt lying to you then. Working it out aloud. Hettys done something we have hated and Im thinking Kensi and Afghanistan, but I never blamed Hetty for Kensi getting captured, that was on her.